I wanrt to do a narration of me skating and hanging out with my firends or of my busy working life at chuckie cheese may 4

i think this is bad white space the white space is trapped and you Can not tell where the eye line is it has good use of photos Whit 5 and it has art work with quotes and pictures along Whit an interesting text

Good Text

this is very bad layout there is no eye line the white space is trapped and the pictures and art are overlapping the text is interesting

Good Photo

this has a very good picture it has allot of art with the lines the white space leads you and the text is the Right size and placed properly

Good Art

there is a good eye line the art is interesting with the backgrouid the white space leads you and there is one dominant picture with leading pictures and the text tells the story the band

FAVORITE PHOTO ESSAY

1. The introspective photographer- Shattered dreams
2. The first person documentary-I love soccer
3. The narrated documentary- Anna's day

BEST SHOTS

SURROUNDING
surroundings the clouds make the building look as it is in the clouds the building does not stick out










PATTERN

the floor has a pattern in the small squares and the large squares










LIGTH

the ligth goes of the walls and creates an nice affect










DETAILS

you can see the locker it is almost as if you are there looking at it










ANGLES AND SHAPES


there are many different shapes on the wall the floor and even a small circel